Persuasive Writing- Why we Should Keep Pets!

We have been learning about persuasive writing and we did writing if we should keep pets or get rid of them. This is my piece of writing about keeping pets!

Title A Short Statement about the topic. eg. ‘Rugby League Is A Great Sport’	pets should stay!🐕😸🐦🐔
Overview/ Statement of position A brief statement of your view about the topic.  What you believe or want to argue.	I strongly believe that having pets is a really great thing to do. Dogs are really good for the police because they can sniff out clothes and find the person who is involved in that crime. Cats are good for catching rats and mice around you house so they don't go in your walls or in your roof. Birds love you and love to sit on your head and your shoulders and tweet in your ears.
Series of Arguments Reasons Your points supporting your view about the topic.  Your arguments to support your statement and information to support these arguments. Remember -argument -supporting detail, reasons, examples	Firstly, dogs are really good for the police because they can sniff out clothes and find the person who is involved in that crime. Dogs are loyal and you can depend on them and they hug you when you cry.
	Secondly,cats are a loyal part of a family they think they are boss but they love their owners inside. Cats are also good for catching rats and mice around you house so they don't go in your walls or in your roof.
	Thirdly,birds  are a really good animal to have because if you train them they can deliver letters and other things to who ever u want. birds love you and love to sit on you head and your shoulders and tweet in your ears.
	Finally, chickens are a great pet to have because you get free eggs and they love to be feed and hand feed my chickens come up to me with their food and eat it out of my hands. They love to play with each other and walk around together.
Concluding statement Summing it up.  A summary of your arguments and your view on the topic.	In conclusion I believe that pets should stay! Because  dogs are really good for police reasons and to have a kind pet, cats are loyal and chase mice and rats away, birds are good if you train them to send letters and also are kind and loving, chickens lay free eggs and always love you. These are loads  of reasons for why pets should stay. Do you agree with me???